Back to the novel
You’ve reread the opening.
The trouble is in chapter twelve.
You remember what happens, but not why the conversation still bothers you. Open that chapter, keep the relevant notes nearby and give this session one question to answer.
What does she want from him here—and what is she unwilling to ask?
Try this: read the exchange without its explanations. Mark where the action stops and the backstory takes over.
Make room for the whole manuscript ↗
