The Room Facing East
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Lena had come to collect the blue bowl, which was what she had told her brother and, until the train reached the coast, what she had told herself.

The house looked smaller without the pear tree. Its absence gave the front window the startled expression of a face without glasses. Someone had filled the hole with pale gravel. Her mother would have called it practical in the voice she used for things she would never forgive.

Lena found the spare key behind the drainpipe. The elastic band around it had hardened to a yellow crescent. She put both in her pocket.

Inside, the air smelled of furniture polish rather than the orange peel her mother used to leave on the stove. The hall mirror had gone. In its place was a rectangle of wallpaper so blue it made the rest of the room look dirty.

Her brother had said he had barely started.

She carried her bag into the kitchen. The bowl stood on the draining board, upside down on a clean towel. There was nothing else beside it. Not a spoon, not a cup, not the wire rack that had left rust marks on the enamel for twenty years.

Lena picked it up. The base was warm.

For a moment she held it with both hands, the way her mother had held it after washing, waiting for someone to take the towel. Then she set it down and checked the sink. Dry. The hot tap was dry too, its metal cool beneath her thumb.

A door moved upstairs.

She took out her phone. Her last message to her brother was still marked unread: Just the bowl. I won't stay.

The staircase made its familiar two complaints as she climbed. At the landing she paused outside the room facing east. Her mother had slept there during the last summer, though everyone still called it the spare room.

Light showed beneath the door. Someone had pushed a towel against the gap, but not far enough.

Lena put the bowl down on the landing. She had no memory of carrying it up.

From inside came a sound she recognized before she could decide what to call it: the short scrape of a chair dragged toward a bed.

She knocked once.

Her brother said, very quietly, “I thought you were coming tomorrow.”